| The story feels vague |
The protagonist’s goal or obstacle is unclear. |
Rewrite the premise to name both directly, then check that the same conflict drives the summary. |
| The middle loses momentum |
Events are listed without showing how they connect. |
Add the choice or consequence that leads from one major event to the next. |
| Too many characters appear |
The draft gives space to roles that do not affect the central story. |
Keep the characters who influence the protagonist, conflict, or outcome; combine or remove the rest. |
| The ending feels disconnected |
The resolution does not follow from earlier decisions. |
Trace the ending back to the protagonist’s choices and revise the setup where the connection is missing. |
| The prose reads like a screenplay |
Dialogue and production details crowd out the story summary. |
Summarize what happens and why it matters; retain dialogue only when it clarifies a key moment. |